broken shells (fixing some serious grammar errors)

Ch. 5 raphs pov

" Hey snagles." Said one of the guys

" Hey Gris what's up?" asked snagles tuff like

" I just spotted some kid in an ally way go to his knees crying." said Gris

" So are we going to take all he has?" I asked

" I like the way you think Raph your good real good but I don't know if that's possible." he responded

" Why not?" I asked challenging his dominance

" Because the kid doesn't have anything to take." he said laughing with another guy named slash

"Wait what did the kid look like?" I asked

" I don't know we didn't gets a good look at him." said slash

" Yeah what's it to you any way Raphie does the tuff guy need to beat up someone that could be his mommy if he were a girl." said snagles

"No just wondering." I said trying not to deck him across the face

" Oh look who's getting angry." he said

" Don't push it." I warned

" Geez calm down I was just messing with you." he said

" That's what we love about your always ready to fight keep it up kid and you'll go places." said slash

" Will do." I responded calming down

" Good now boys we all's should get to sleep." said Gris and we went to our separate sleeping areas

Man how I wonder what my brothers are doing. I don't care personally I wouldn't go back in a million years ever. I wouldn't go back even if I was dyeing or they were. it doesn't matter who we are or where we come from or what we do it's where we end up that counts. where did that come from? don't start thinking soft dude your tuff act like it.

I laid down and put my head on my pillow and feel the cold hard concert floor, as I sleep, hoping that tomorrow will bring a new chance to beat someone up once more.