broken shells (fixing some serious grammar errors)

ch.11 tay's pov

   "what do you think?" she asked handing me a mirror

"wow I actually like it." I said looking at my hair that used to be to my middle back now at my cheek bones

"Now make up." she said giving me Earth tones to match my skin 

"Thanks" I said leaving out the door 

        I look down at my cell phone when I was done and checked my messages.

"oh my gosh. Really Leo that many calls in the last I don't know how long." I said out loud as I walked down the street

        I started listening to the messages and they made me cry. I hated that I couldn't call him back and I also disliked that I had changed so much. I also liked it though because it was me the old me that Leo never knew. Actually no one ever ever knew and they weren't going to. Did I just say that? I thought, No I don't like the old me do I? I wont go back I refuse they were the worst, I'm good theres nothing thats gong to change that even if it ment that I would die I"m not going over. I would die if someone found out about it, but that tattoo was and still is a constant reminder that the past always finds you. 

        As i walked I found an old building. It had an abandond feel to it, but it wasn't totally empty I could feel that something or someone was in there. so I took the chance and walked in. 

        the inside remindes me of the lair that Donnie lives in. The ari was cool, crisp, fresh and the place felt less abandond like it had life. I saw a tree in the center and it wasn't any tree it was a Japaness cherry bloosom.

"Who goes there." said a wise voice making me jump

"Just a girl that means no harm." I said a littel shakey

"come into the light young one so I may see your face," he said and I walked forward "take off your jacket." he comanded and I did what he said

"can you come into the light now?" I asked and he did only the he wasn't a he in fact they weren't even a they

" your a rat! no offens.' I said shocked

"Yes and you used to be a purple dragon no?" he asked me

"yes I used to when i was younger my mom left me in an ally way so did my dad but they are gone now." I said

"I see, scince when did you dicide that the purple dragons were no good." he said like it was natrual

"three years." i said and shocked myself that I was being so open and honest

"well its getting late, you best get back home just one thing before you go whats your name?" he said

" Taylor sir." I said honorably

"well Taylor can you promise me two things one come back tomrrow same time and two don't tell a singal soul you saw me." he said

"I promise I wont tell anyone." I said starting to leave

"wait what about my second answer." he said

"yes I promise." I said leaving out the door and to the pitch black street

                                                                 ATHOUORS NOTE

hey valuble readers, hope you like this update sorry its kinda short but in any case here you are. I got so excited today when in looked and i had 206 reads. Thats all thanks to you guys. in any case i hope you guys liked the master splinter action in this chapter. comments and what think are always welcome ( sorry i know i say this alot). so thanks once agin for making witting this book so fun. update you later my shell lovers.

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