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The Alpha Calls

7/10 Premise is good. The plot is erratic and confusing, the storyline is odd and flakey, grammar and spelling need a major edit, and the characters are off. This is other teens rule the world kind of tale and it shows. This is a puzzle and if you enjoy having to take notes to keep up with who and what is up or down then here's your tale.

Good luck and good reading. 

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