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HRamsay

8/10

Good plot, great foundation, the storyline moves well it's a good tale.

Yeah, yeah I know what about the characters...

Avery starts off kick-ass especially for someone of her age; smart, strategic thinker, on it.  While the plot moves on and the storyline flows she just began to piss me off. Less ass-kicking and more whining.  Less thinking and more whimpering.  Less on it and more 'what's happening'.

It has an 8 because even though by the end I was ready to shoot her myself.  I really liked the guys and would love to see more of them.

Go read and tell me if you'd want her on your survival squad.

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