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This needs an edit. And don't comment on the mistakes or the author blocks you. With that out of the way...
This has become one of my favorite premises lately. The whole 'a race is dying because only males are left and it is up to the females of Earth to make our world rich/more powerful/better protected by giving of our wombs and hearts'. The plot is solid and well laid out. The storyline flows beautifully and doesn't feel rushed or stretched, I love that it takes them a long time to travel from Earth to their planet. The characters are rich, well filled out, and colorful. The author lays down a firm foundation and goes on to build a complete and believable world.
The downside to all this imagination is the grammar and word usage. Yes, I commented on the fact that their, there, and they're are not interchangeable.
If you can bring yourself to overlook the issues, then you are in for a wonderfully simple and fun read. I am looking forward to the edited version.
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Tales and What I Think of Them
RandomWhat tales made the 10+/10 to what made the 8/10. These are the tales that made me cry, laugh, get mad, or just want to read them again and again. Hope you enjoy them as much as I have. Great life and Great reads to you all.
