Povs switches like crazy
Example:
Jen pov: I kissed her
Max: I kissed Jen
Jen: It was gr8
Max: Yeah I loved it omG
Jen: Her Lips
Max: Were
Jen: So
Jen: Soft
Jen: Wait why am the only pov. Max?
Max: Yeah
Jen: Love you
Max: You 2 bab
Why This Is Annoying: This is what we call "bad writing" you know like this book? Yeah
How to fix this: Just calm down about it. Take it slow and easy. Make Jen's or Max's a lot lot longer maybe even the whole chapter be One POV.
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