"Oh, hi! Didn't see you there, my name..."
Example: He is my ex boyfriend. Oh sorry, my name is blah Sally boring blah. I live on NooneCares street blah blah blah, and I'm ShutupSally years old blah...
Why This Is Annoying:
We don't need this sentence anymore. #nomoreclicheswattpad #orbadboys #Allweneedisgoodstories
How To Fix this: You will need better ways to introduce your characters. I mean yes sometimes it good to know the character but that is what the description is for. Maybe give out infomation when it is needed and give little hints about your character like:
"Madam your age please?" the lady asked. "Seventeen" I muttered.
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100 book cliches {Completed}
RandomHIGHEST RATING: #6 IN RANDOM WARNING: THERE ARE SWEARING MATURE THEMES AND TRIGGERING SUBJECTS Welcome to the Cliche Manual. I will explain to y'all the most known cliches and explain how to fix them, therefore, making your book more pleasant to re...