Cringe Compliation: Time Warp (Chapter 2)

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ITS ME IM BACK (at school ewwwwww)

 Why do they have to wear the same outfits though?

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Why do they have to wear the same outfits though?

And why is Raina's death being emphasized so much? I already said she died, now we have to go through this? Was this a lame attempt to give the reader feels?

 And why is Raina's death being emphasized so much? I already said she died, now we have to go through this? Was this a lame attempt to give the reader feels?

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Okay, first, irrelevant flashback, since I don't remember Raina's death and/or how she died being a significant part of the plot.

And second, why save someone just to kill them almost painlessly a second later? If I were Sparkle, I would have just left her to suffer and die painfully at the jaws of the alligator.

Okay, I'm pretty much CinemaSins-ing this fanfic, but whatever. CinemaSins is awesome.

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