This chapter was short enough that I could take a screenshot of it.
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Okay, first off, the edge factor. As soon as she wakes up, she begins thinking of her dead sister. It's pretty obvious as to why that's some shitty writing.
And then the instant description of the character. Sigh.
And the fact that in Hunger Games canon, Finnick was the youngest to win the Games at age 14. But nope, Miss Mary-Sue here completely destroyed that. Sigh. What a Mary-Sue.
