This is the first time I'm writing in the form of an animal; please give me feedbacks, and comments. Before you read the story there are a few things you should know:
Star Land: the city
Leader: the alpha male
Death stick: gun
Death pebble: bullets from a gun
Death user: hunter/humans
Stag brain: a swear word for wolves
Moons: a month
Prologue
My paws thudded against the forest ground, the leaves and grass shots soft under my pads. I raced through the forest, hardly wasting a breath, yet as fast as the wind. I crashed out of the forest with one leap; and the icy air caught my soft pelt as I halted to a stop dangerously close to the gorge. Before me stood Star Land.
Tonight Star Land was brighter than ever, its lights shone vividly, almost hurting my eyes.
This was my place, no one else knew of it, not even my best friend Leaf. I laid my head on my paws and let out a sigh, staring into the bright landscape. Then it happened, a death pebble ran right in front of me, I howled in fright, and the death stick blared again, I didn't waste time, turning tail, I fled into the forest. This was the beginning of yet another big battle.
How was it??? Did you like it??? Please comment even if it's not a nice one, I would really like to hear your opinions. :D
Vampire_a-rose xox
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Stories from my nooby days :3
RandomHere are the stories I wrote from aggeess ago. Putting them all together so if you wanna have a read of use some of the ideas go ahead :) Just to say, they're pretty cheesy and childish considering I wrote them when I was 12 .-.
