Clarification

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//It was brought to my attention that I was hazy in regards to explaining the whole Brian knew about the uncle thing.

It goes like this: Venn Is brought to Lyra's home-Uncle is killed during him being unconscious-Mother finds uncle-Brian talks to Venn,Lyra and her dad- Brian is told about the incident and goes to investigate the crime scene.

Thanks to SeanBurton for pointing that out. The questions and constructive criticism will definitely be helpful. I am working on the next chapter right now, so any thoughts you guys would like to throw out there are welcome! (I am brainstorming right now so feel free to throw out plot ideas)~Eterne

P.S. It just occurred to me that I like the name Sean, so I'm going to throw a side character in with that name!

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