A little piece of nothing

A little piece of nothing

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MiaLotus By MiaLotus Updated Jan 22, 2015

Short semi-zen poems. Fruits. Insects. Cats. Nothing.

  • cats
  • fruits
  • insects
  • nothing
  • nowhere
CottonJones CottonJones Apr 13, 2016
I love this poem with its story of eating of the fruit and a meeting up, a stroll with a hint of a romance, and if you take it deeper a correlation between the orange and the apple in the Garden of Eden, Mia, because it sounds like paradise to me. Lpf, Olan
hughena hughena Sep 06, 2014
this poem is breathing joy. right to the last line. warm and ripe. :))
SuzyHazelwood SuzyHazelwood Sep 05, 2014
Oh, this really beautiful - it's like an amazingly colourful dream, one I wouldn't want to leave!! :o)
think_done think_done Jul 09, 2014
This little piece of nothing is very sweet and special! Sounds like a mesmerizing place to be in!
- - Jul 03, 2014
Cute story.  I like the line it's like drinking the sun's energy.
joy_reid joy_reid Jun 29, 2014
Lovely, 'breathing joy' and how wonderful to find an orchard near the beach :))