My Newly Discovered Twin

My Newly Discovered Twin

4.8K Reads 82 Votes 16 Part Story
Janette-June By RainbowSkittlez Updated Feb 24, 2011

After 14 years, Harry and Harley (twins!) are reunited. The more and longer they are together, the more strength and ability they gain. The realize that everyone around them aren't who they seem to be, their all... fairy- tails. And if their fairy tails.... then what are we? And they soon find out that they are the prince and princesses of Narnabithya (A world full of mythical creatures). Family, friendship, and deep into the story, love :) Will Harley and Harry be able to stay together? Is Margret really a mythical creature? Is Keven really my mate? Or is it Cody? Click hear and find out now! http://www.wattpad.com/938990-my-newly-discovered-twin

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  • best
  • crushes
  • demon
  • dragon
  • dreams
  • fairy
  • family
  • friends
  • funny
  • grr
  • hope
  • long
  • love
  • magic
  • mystory
  • mythical
  • mzjune14
  • non
  • paranormal
  • pixie
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  • twilight
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  • vampire
  • witch
  • witches
  • wolf
Smileys Smileys Feb 21, 2011
Hey was really good but spellin,spellin,spellin 
                              u no her twin bro kinda looks like a pixie haha
ChemicalKid13 ChemicalKid13 Feb 21, 2011
A great start! Lots of grammer and spelling errors which make it confusing, you shudd fix that...Could you please check out my story, "Can You See Me" in return?
tianajade tianajade Feb 20, 2011
A good start. Lots of grammar and spelling errors. Just go through and read it again and fix those up. (: It's a good beginning though, and the story line sounds interesting. Keep writing!
LolzLexii LolzLexii Feb 18, 2011
There we're some spelling and grammar errors that I noticed right away. Make sure you proof read and if possible, have someone else proof read it as well. 
                              
                              It's a good story, though. Keep writing :)
Fallzswimmer Fallzswimmer Feb 17, 2011
I think that this is a totally awesome idea, and I love the plot. If you would like a few pointers on what to try to work on, I would say spelling and grammar. One of the best ways to fix this problem is by typing you work out in a word document before you post it. Have fun and good luck :D
_Chez_ _Chez_ Feb 14, 2011
a few spelling mistakes but it happens. anyway ignore the spelling and its a great story!! ima keep readin!!!