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Elemental Orbs

Elemental Orbs

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Scott Toberman By ScottToberman Updated Jan 06, 2011

An epic fantasy story of 3 mighty elemental animal heros who must defeat the evil society known as The Black Crows. With the power of the Orbs can our heros defeat them and bring peace to New York City? Find out.

december_girl december_girl Jan 06, 2011
I must say, it is a rather interesting idea, but you should definitely keep up with it. Just watch your sentences, some of them are a little awkward... and remember "I" is capitalized when you are talking about yourself, and when you write "I've" and "I'm" you sometimes forget the apostrophes.