Mags-azine

Mags-azine

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emkitkat By emkitkat Updated Apr 09, 2011

This story is about a girl named Maggie (Mags). She's and everyday teenager until she discovers her hidden qualities. However, she goes on to study journalism but soon figures out that this isn't what she is destined for.

emkitkat emkitkat Jun 05, 2011
@Jellybeanxox Ha, Really :P Thankyou. And yes hehe, I like using description alot and Yay. But yes I agree :D xoxo
emkitkat emkitkat Jun 05, 2011
@Jellybeanxox Aha, I fail :P But I will most definitely take both of your advise and I will include a prologue when I get round to finishing this one :D xoxo
IWearSneakers IWearSneakers Jun 03, 2011
It's getting better, again you have used a lot of description which is a good thing and you have also done very well introducing us to the main character. The prologue is very good so i suggest you do a bit more about that as we know Meg quite well now :) 
IWearSneakers IWearSneakers Jun 03, 2011
This is very descriptive but doesn't capture the reader too well. I agree with miss_dizzyhead that you should do a prologue :) 
emkitkat emkitkat May 31, 2011
Aha, Yeah. It's kinda boring. I know, I'm sorry @miss_dizzyhead. But Thats a great Idea, I will do so when I go back to it :) xoxo