This story is about a girl named Maggie (Mags). She's and everyday teenager until she discovers her hidden qualities. However, she goes on to study journalism but soon figures out that this isn't what she is destined for.
@Jellybeanxox Ha, Really :P Thankyou. And yes hehe, I like using description alot and Yay. But yes I agree :D xoxo
@Jellybeanxox Aha, I fail :P But I will most definitely take both of your advise and I will include a prologue when I get round to finishing this one :D xoxo
It's getting better, again you have used a lot of description which is a good thing and you have also done very well introducing us to the main character. The prologue is very good so i suggest you do a bit more about that as we know Meg quite well now :)
This is very descriptive but doesn't capture the reader too well. I agree with miss_dizzyhead that you should do a prologue :)
Aha, Yeah. It's kinda boring. I know, I'm sorry @miss_dizzyhead. But Thats a great Idea, I will do so when I go back to it :) xoxo