Desires ( R rated)

Desires ( R rated)

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rashihemnani By rashihemnani Updated May 03, 2016

It all started when one night I got kidnapped by this handsome and crazy guy he knew everything about me that's when he decided to make me his and tame me

  • bdsm
  • identityunknown
  • love
  • master
  • thriller
ShelleyratedxMJ ShelleyratedxMJ Jul 14, 2015
This has great potential, but where are the periods, commas?
ShelleyratedxMJ ShelleyratedxMJ Jul 14, 2015
This has great potential, but where are the periods, commas?
SouthernDevil SouthernDevil Oct 18, 2013
your ideas are good, and it seems to be good, but the punctuation is horrible and i can hardly understand some parts