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Goats from Lambs

Goats from Lambs

38.2K Reads 1.7K Votes 26 Part Story
Paul PK Kingston By PaulKingston Updated Jun 29

After bodies start showing up in the middle of the street, hollowed and headless, Detective Rashida Heyes and her partner, Travis Virgil, attempt to solve the case in what seems less and less to be a murder by man, and more and more like the cleansing of the world.

Cleansing of the world.....damn. Armageddon, Tunguska event, damn
Creepy. But on one paragraph, I would replace 'taught fabric' with 'taut fabric'
                              Simple spelling error, but easy to fix.
                              Also, I know it may be in your characters nature, but I would tone down in the swearing. It's distracting.
-Aching- -Aching- Nov 20, 2016
Wait I thought he was just putting his hand in his pocket oh lordie this just got dirty
                              I love it
RocktheCupcake RocktheCupcake Nov 03, 2016
Wow amazing start!!  it felt as if I'm watching a good horror movie!!
40ismahname 40ismahname Jan 11
Not to be this person, but I'm being this person. “Hers” does not require an apostrophe. Just like “Theirs.”
greysmorningcoffee greysmorningcoffee Nov 23, 2016
I had to read this because the word 'goats' was in the title :)
                              It's great so far