Goats from Lambs

Goats from Lambs

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Paul PK Kingston By PaulKingston Updated Sep 18

After bodies start showing up in the middle of the street, hollowed and headless, Detective Rashida Heyes and her partner, Travis Virgil, attempt to solve the case in what seems less and less to be a murder by man, and more and more like the cleansing of the world.

NinaAndale NinaAndale 6 days ago
Alright I've come to a decision that I might like this story so I'm adding this to my library for further inspection
So...he does not like sl**s but he also hates the fact that Layla is modest and apparently a tease...? :S
Oh no seriously he is h4Rd rn? Well, at least you can strap anything down with duct tape.. #killer#suffer#dead#freak
Cleansing of the world.....damn. Armageddon, Tunguska event, damn
AiMila AiMila Sep 13
I don't think rape works like that but hey it's your fantasy buddy
Creepy. But on one paragraph, I would replace 'taught fabric' with 'taut fabric'
                              Simple spelling error, but easy to fix.
                              
                              Also, I know it may be in your characters nature, but I would tone down in the swearing. It's distracting.