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I Just Want Someone To Look After Me

I Just Want Someone To Look After Me

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xBliss_Is_Hellx By xBliss_Is_Hellx Updated Nov 22, 2010

Dee is worked down to the bone. Having to look after her ill mother and clingy little brother Max not to mention still having to go to school and a part-time job. She just wants someone to loko after her for once. Shes just so tired, so broken inside. She can't trust anyone though, not after her past, the darkness within her. Then she meets Chase on a dark cold night in an aleey way. She stires but she simply cannot fight her attraction for him. But there is somthing about him, something sad and dark about his past. Will she find out and live with the consequences... or die trying? <3

RennHaynes230 RennHaynes230 Dec 09, 2013
I like this story, but I think you made dee abit to old, if she was, say 14/15 id feel more sorry for her, its ok though, keep writing !
Saxion1 Saxion1 Mar 04, 2011
This story is very good! ^-^ I'd love to hear more of it from you. It could use a bit of error work but everybody messes up on that. But very good job if I might say so myself :)