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Soph By Sophieboffie Completed

New School, New Life, Changed Father. When Arabella's mother dies, her father cannot live without his mate, his mind changes and blames his daughter for her death. This new changed father starts to abuse her, striking her and controlling her like he would a slave. But when fate decides to unite Arabella with her mate, will they destroy her father, her mate or Herself?

xGeeBeex xGeeBeex Apr 04
I can already tell by the first paragraph that this is written really well. The detail is amazing. Well done :)
Very well written. I don't think there are to many commas. If you like it that way just keep it that way.
I always send notes when I talk BS about someone then rip the paper into a million pieces
buggshv1 buggshv1 Jun 03, 2016
I love how you made the character structure and as well as the flow of the moods, well done.
pearlpenguin pearlpenguin Aug 29, 2016
Freaky AF because my name is Arabella!!!!!!!!! So glad to see my name though.
SweetPatoot SweetPatoot Jun 14, 2016
The interaction between Arabella and the mean girl really reminded me of when Harry and Draco first meet, lol!