My Maker ~ My Tangled Tales

My Maker ~ My Tangled Tales

40 Part Story 145K Reads 1.2K Votes
NSTinsley By NSTinsley Completed

He made me, He trained me, He protected me, He tought me to kill, He took me under his wing. 

 So why do I hate him? Everytime I try and leave I cant, Everytime I try and kill him I cant.

He says he loves me, He says I am the specail one.

 So why do I love him back? Everytime I try and be myself I get punished, Everytime I disobey him I get punished.

He gave me brothers, He gave me himself.

 So why can't I stand them? Everytime I try and please them I'm not good enough, Everytime I try and be like them I'm not good enough.

abbsw92 abbsw92 Mar 06, 2012 06:47PM
This was awesome! I stayed up all night reading it! I couldn't put it down! It does need some work. But it was really awesome! About to read my mate now (:
NSTinsley NSTinsley Feb 28, 2012 03:09PM
@koko101 he'd would make me weak at the knees @fang-girl  hes sexy ! that bad boy look he has is freakin sexy
lilly-rain lilly-rain Nov 12, 2011 08:36AM
Great start aussimo - i read this awhile ago...and i forgot to comment, i also read chap 2 and forgot to comment, lol, im so lazy at times
                              
                              loser two over n out
NSTinsley NSTinsley Oct 27, 2011 09:18PM
@Baby_Zafrina.  The song is called Not strong enough and it's by Apocalyptica ft Brent smith
                              I love this song
NSTinsley NSTinsley Sep 29, 2011 04:47AM
@unusuallygifted Awe :) u made me feel so special. Thank u so much!!! I'll up load at least two chapters for u tomorrow when I get home from the doctors :) 
                              Your awesome
omguf shud really consider publishing this...ur better than most professional authors out there