My Maker ~ My Tangled Tales

40 Part Story 144K Reads 1.2K Votes
NSTinsley By NSTinsley Completed
He made me, He trained me, He protected me, He tought me to kill, He took me under his wing. 
     So why do I hate him? Everytime I try and leave I cant, Everytime I try and kill him I cant.
    He says he loves me, He says I am the specail one.
     So why do I love him back? Everytime I try and be myself I get punished, Everytime I disobey him I get punished.
    He gave me brothers, He gave me himself.
     So why can't I stand them? Everytime I try and please them I'm not good enough, Everytime I try and be like them I'm not good enough.
Why do they ALWAYS walk down the dark alley!!!! I mean, really!? Idiots.
This was awesome! I stayed up all night reading it! I couldn't put it down! It does need some work. But it was really awesome! About to read my mate now (:
Great start aussimo - i read this awhile ago...and i forgot to comment, i also read chap 2 and forgot to comment, lol, im so lazy at times
                                    loser two over n out
Intense! I loved it. This is really good! And it doesn't seem like your typical werewolf story either.
omguf shud really consider publishing this...ur better than most professional authors out there