Midnight

Midnight

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Cara By JiJixx Updated Sep 09

He was mysterious and dark, something that she couldn't explain. He was something that she never thought even in her wildest dreams.
 The death of people around her, makes her more curious about Harry and his mates. What is Harry, anyway? 
  
  'Midnight, strange mystic hour, when the veil between frail past and eternal future grows thin.'

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Ok, now I'm hoping he's like an awesome, parasitic alien or something!
Are they dating in real life?  I don't know much about either.
Don't say you welcome criticism, and then say you don't.  You have to pick on.
Your tense is inconsistent.  Probably more important than usual when an opening sentence.
I don't understand the 'keeping me in pieces from behind' part.  Keep an eye on your tense.  You slip from past to present and back again within the same sentences.
Tyla_13 Tyla_13 Dec 08, 2015
Yas I'm so glad to have found somebody that agrees with me! All I get is hate whenever I mentions haylor!