Average in hopes

Average in hopes

4.4K Reads 81 Votes 16 Part Story
ashmitash By ashmitash Updated Jan 30, 2012

"Get the hell out of my room!" I shrieked in a low voice. Nate and the tramp sprang up and stared at me. The tramp was smiling cockily, wow she reminded me of Nate and Nate was also smiling at me cockily. Weird...

"Didn't know you'd be back so soon." he replied, chuckling.

"What are you doing in my bed?" 

"You mean the bed that I paid for?"

  • airie
  • brec
  • imgre
  • mason
  • mirtis
  • nate
  • new
  • park
  • sallie
  • york
BARBIEHOE BARBIEHOE Nov 26, 2011
It's really good!!! Keep reading you have a lot of potential in writing!!! :)
ashmitash ashmitash Oct 03, 2011
@shortie1515 @infected06mushroom  thanks u both made my day! :)
shortie1515 shortie1515 Sep 27, 2011
Hey you totally keep writing you have alot of potential in you so keep up the good work it's really interesting I fanned voted and commented because this story is worth it ad you can see I don't fan vote or comment on anyone I just do it on the works that I truly love like yours
ashmitash ashmitash Aug 27, 2011
@writerbookie15 thankss :) your comment is much appreciated :D