Father

Father

351K Reads 7.4K Votes 20 Part Story
Kelsey Turcotte By kc1tubbol Completed

Father has forty children, but they aren't his children. They are his prisoners. They must call him father. VIvien Love has been prisoner here for two years now and wants out of the hell they live in just like evryone else, but when Father 'falls in love' with her more serious consequences emerge. She now believes she will be able to escape and rescue everyone, but what of Father has turly fallen in love with her? Will she lie to save her life? Or will they all die trying?

  • baby
  • blood
  • caitlyn
  • computer
  • crash
  • cry
  • father
  • hand
  • horror
  • kill
  • late
  • roam
  • sophia
  • vivien
Buttercup0298 Buttercup0298 Jul 31, 2017
With their power in numbers they could overpower father 🤔
Well, there IS running water in the house and also electricity; So the 'father' has to pay the bills for it. And peolple would know that he lives there because yeah.
This is just like that other book I read, I forgot what it’s called, but there’s a guy called clover and he kidnaps girls and rapes them once he ‘falls in love with them’
rareandfruitfulmeme rareandfruitfulmeme Mar 16, 2017
I think the concept is good, just the structure, grammar, punctuation, spelling and language could be improved
IredZeugirdor27 IredZeugirdor27 Aug 29, 2016
So there is 40 of you? 30 girls and 10 guys? Why can't you take on a old man? 😑😑😑😑😑
ellabellaiom ellabellaiom Sep 30, 2016
Ahah it looks like it says the year drifts off to sleep 😂