Father

Father

356K Reads 7.5K Votes 20 Part Story
Kelsey Turcotte By kc1tubbol Completed

Father has forty children, but they aren't his children. They are his prisoners. They must call him father. VIvien Love has been prisoner here for two years now and wants out of the hell they live in just like evryone else, but when Father 'falls in love' with her more serious consequences emerge. She now believes she will be able to escape and rescue everyone, but what of Father has turly fallen in love with her? Will she lie to save her life? Or will they all die trying?

  • baby
  • blood
  • caitlyn
  • computer
  • crash
  • cry
  • father
  • hand
  • horror
  • kill
  • late
  • roam
  • sophia
  • vivien
NikkiaCharterHaralso NikkiaCharterHaralso Jul 13, 2017
Strong!!    Ok I have to offer to edit this story for you if no one else has
Buttercup0298 Buttercup0298 Jul 31, 2017
With their power in numbers they could overpower father 🤔
Well, there IS running water in the house and also electricity; So the 'father' has to pay the bills for it. And peolple would know that he lives there because yeah.
This is just like that other book I read, I forgot what it’s called, but there’s a guy called clover and he kidnaps girls and rapes them once he ‘falls in love with them’
This is a really good story even if there are a couple grammar problems
MarietteMeyer9 MarietteMeyer9 May 30, 2017
Father is too string.......meaning he is tall and thin? Or did u mean STRONG??????? Grammar please