ATL Love

ATL Love

17.2K Reads 304 Votes 14 Part Story
LeenaLovesYuhh By LeenaLovesYuh Updated Aug 16

The new girl Jasmine has just arrived in Atlanta and its already starting out bad. She meets the schools biggest asshole. She's met with jealous girls who want nothing more than to be in her place. With her only girl friend Shay, Jasmine tries to stay away from all the drama the school and neighborhood is trying to bring her way. Drama is never to far away though.

quana24 quana24 Jul 13
You did good for your first time,for future reference there's no quarter back in basket ball 😂😂 but good beginning.NEED NEXT PAGE PLEASE
LeenaLovesYuh LeenaLovesYuh Mar 12, 2013
Thanks @Cyn1calAng3l That Was Really Helpful I'll Put That Into Consideration When I Post My Next Chapter Tomorrow. :D
ShrugMyShoulders ShrugMyShoulders Mar 11, 2013
I really like the dialogue between the kids. It is really realistic. But that is all there really is. You have a few paragraphs explaining but not much. I can't really visualize the characters. It seems a lot like a play, if you ask me. But I like the plot line. Keep writing
LeenaLovesYuh LeenaLovesYuh Feb 27, 2013
More to come tomorrow if I can get a couple more votes pleaseeeeeeee
LeenaLovesYuh LeenaLovesYuh Feb 26, 2013
Don't forget to leave me comments. I would love to know what you guys think about it so far. :D