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The Souls of Pondera

The Souls of Pondera

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Sandy Wang By AwesomeAsian Updated Aug 20, 2010

Pondera was once a world of perfect balance. Ruled by the White Soul and the Black Soul, it was a peaceful and prosperous kingdom. But when the White Soul was killed, and the balance was overthrown, the kingdom was split into two and thrown into war and chaos.

Centuries later, the search for the Souls - the only ones with the power to restore the kingdom to peace and balance - starts once more. Kamira, an orphan of the White Kingdom, begins a dangerous search for the ones she knows will save her kingdom. At the same time, Eljin, crown prince of the Black Kingdom, begins his own quest to find the souls, to remove them as an obstacle in the path of his kingdom's victory. Together they will travel on an amazing journey to find what was once lost, and rediscover the power of the Souls of Pondera. 

MiriKiri MiriKiri Aug 28, 2010
aww that's AWESOME!!! I like it really really REEEAAALLLYYYY MUCH!!!!! <3
blazing_dreams4 blazing_dreams4 Jul 28, 2010
@Kaitlyn_87 Awesome, thank you so much!! (from both of us - the co-writer is sitting next to me lol) That was a very nice comment!
Meagan_87 Meagan_87 Jul 28, 2010
This is great! So hard to find a story with NO spelling mistakes and paragraphs. This story is very interesting and it doesn't seem like the plot is being rushed. I have no suggestions on how to improve; it's simply wonderful-- all of it! 
                              On to the next! :) 
AzyFish AzyFish Jul 21, 2010
i looove the idea of this story!!! thanks blazing_dreams4 for showing me this, and you have to let me meet your friend awesomeasian one day she seems aamazing!! i cant wait to read more!
half-bloodninja half-bloodninja Jul 20, 2010
I love this! i thank blazing_dreams4 for suggesting this :) I've always loved her writing and i love the plot of this story. I can't wait to see what magical writing you guys come up with lol :p 
AwesomeAsian AwesomeAsian Jul 20, 2010
@Emmiie Hey
                              thanks for the comment and vote, I'm glad you liked it :D
                              I really love blazing_dreams4's writing too, she actually was the one to come up with the idea of this story originally :P  
                              We'll post more soon!! :)