"From now on, your name is Belle. I shall be the beast to ravage your body. Is that understood?"
(Contains BDSM and rough sex.)
I love how this story has actually detail other story's would say "I was kidnapped and we are going somewhere, now we are at somewhere" Continue
I mean... you DO own that sweater that looks like a potato sack
Keep it up. It's cool use any word you like.. I like your story
I love the dark it gives me thoughts and time to show emotions
It's a good story line but you are doing a lot of telling and not showing such as when the character breathed in the Chloroform, how did the cloth feel? Little things like that will make the story flow so much better 😊
If someone was going to kidnap someone for ransom they would check into the family's finances before doing something stupid. Clearly if you poor. .. you're getting raped.