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My name is Kimberly...O.o Does that mean I'm a servant? 😐😓😶
So you said you were 14 2 years ago, so you were 16 when you wrote this and said you know more grammar and spelling, yet you STILL spell title wrong, you spelled it titAL instead of titLE...
I like the original version much better than this one, mind you, it's still good, just not the same story, a rewrite is meant to be the same story, yet improved, and this story is merely a new one, not a rewrite.
"So you've been taking care of the company all by yourself this whole time?"
Sorry I commented so much with corrections, but seriously, if you need an editor I'd be happy to oblige. :D It is better than the last book though.
Should be "She had offered to help, but was..." and "Is she was clumsy with something so simple as carrying luggage, who knew what disaster..."