It All Started With An Apple

It All Started With An Apple

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ashley By TaintedRain Completed

Was published, but is now off the market--I'm sorry!

Brianne is the opposite of her best friend, Kyla.  Kyla is open-minded; Brianne is closed off, judgmental.  Kyla is a hopeless romantic.  Brianne?  Not so much.  So when Kyla shoves an apple into her face telling her to throw it across the cafeteria so she can find her future love, Brianne is anything but interested.  
And yet she throws the apple anyway.  
Who does the apple hit?  Dannon Barone, the most popular boy in school.  Though he's seemingly sweet and all-smiles, Brianne dislikes him.  She thinks he's a fake, a fraud, someone who is just charming the crowds in order to gain popularity.  But Brianne is about to learn that stereotypes are not true, and that she's been too quick to judge those around her.
Brianne Nichols' life is about to change forever.  And what does she have to thank for it?  A bruised piece of fruit.
Who would have known that a stupid apple could be right?

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Okay, so I know the prenote says to find any errors you can.  Just letting you know there's no point to that anymore because I've reedited it two more times after this one (extensively so), and already sent it in to be self-published.

The only reason that the prenote is still up is because a fan made an amusing slideshow and if I edit anything then the tags for the wattys will be gone and I'll no longer be entered , hahah!

queenin_210 queenin_210 Aug 09
A better book cover, I think that if you made it prettier you would attact more people
'Coma' and 'death' are in the tags... should I read this? Or is pain foreseen in my future? And, hey, is Kyla Greek?
I agree about the cover. It makes it look like the story would be poorly written, but it's definitely not. Changing the cover would help tremendously.
 #Rr for the nth time because this book is heartbreakingly beautiful! ❤
rue_manny rue_manny Aug 11
I think the book cover could be changed, I'm pretty sure that this book is gonna be really good, but I wouldn't have chosen it when I saw the cover
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