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Hey everyone!

So, yes, you read right, this is It All Started With An Apple!  Again.  No. I'm not going to make you re-read the same exact thing that was on the other thing posted.  Blah.  That version sucked.  No offense to myself.

Anyway.

So, this is the re-written version.  I'm not going to say edited because it's pretty much what I did on the first version: wrote without really looking for the mistakes.

So, here's what I was thinking.

I want as many readers as possible to read this, keeping an eye for mistakes.  And then, when you comment, list the mistakes out.  Sure, you can do your regular, "hoorah!" comments (bahah that sounded weird), but I want to catch the mistakes and fix them.

So, here's what I want:

1. Tell me where you found any grammar/misspelling/pretty much anything like that mistakes.

2. Tell me what you think should be changed (style wise).

3. Tell me what you like!

Okay, so that's pretty much it! (: Welcome to the re-written edition of IASWAA! :D

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