Monique

Monique

63K Reads 4.2K Votes 29 Part Story
Victoria By altarviolence Completed

He runs his fingers through her hair and tugs on it. "You're my doll," he says as he breathes her in. "You need me. You're mine to play with. 
  You're mine. Without me, you're nothing."
   
  What happens when he one day disappears and the monsters buried deep in the basement begin scratching the walls and howling her name in the night? 
  Why does her mother force big yellow pills down her throat, saying it's for the best?
  Why isn't she allowed in the basement?
  Who's in the basement? What's in the basement? 
  Who is the little boy with sunken eyes and hollow cheeks, crying for his mother?
  
  Tick tock, Monique. 
  The monsters are crawling up the basement.
  And they're coming for you.

I should be studying, but now I'll just play how long can I read until I'm despairing.
                              
                              I'm curious as to why will happen next!
This is awkward, my name is Monique but great writing! Love the plot so far
youngflowrr youngflowrr Nov 11, 2015
I just started your story because my mom her name is Monique, i'm from Belgium and honestly i really like your story even if it's in English!
ChemicalBrides ChemicalBrides Oct 06, 2015
I really like your writing so far, and I can't wait to continue reading. By the way, I love the cover to this story. c:
SophieValois SophieValois Oct 04, 2015
Oh, dunno but it reminded me to American Horror Story. I'll continue reading and I'll see more about the plot
stressfuI stressfuI Jul 11, 2015
I really love the cover, the name Monique, and the plotline so far! Great job. :)