Soulless Creature

Soulless Creature

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marsy7 By marsy7 Updated Jul 17, 2016

Lucy is not dramatic, she's not whiny, and she never lets the world put her down. She is sympathetic, and curious as ever - so what happens when she meets a dark, brooding, hot dude who unexpectedly keeps getting in her way? 
  He might look like an angel but he certainly is the exact opposite. He is everybody's worst nightmare, and no one should get in his way because he might just end their lives with a snap. Lucy should definitely avoid him at all costs, but what happens of course? She falls in love with him.
  
  ❝Be careful, looks can be deceiving. What may be easy on the eyes, may just be a serpent in disguise.❞
  
  Cover done by @_kaylaxmarie

AustensGrudge AustensGrudge Nov 28, 2016
Amy is the kind of girl that would survive in a horror movie
smolclaire smolclaire Feb 29, 2016
Drake sounds like an ass :P but he has potential as a character. Great chapter your descriptive language is on par :) I want to read more!
StylezGirl101 StylezGirl101 Jul 27, 2016
O.O im used to guys with piercings and dark hair...this is new
exquisitehearts exquisitehearts Jan 12, 2016
I loved this chapter, you used a ton of words that kept me hooked! If only this was longer :/
- - Jan 09, 2016
I was intrigued by the synopsis of your story ad started reading right away. I have to say it is very astounding and is very well described. I love Lucy's character. It is very good. Keep it up! =)
solacing solacing Jan 06, 2016
Haha wow that was kind of a shocker, I can't even imagine if a dude acted like that towards me. Pretty interesting, though. You say he isn't a typical bad boy so I'm looking forward to finding out your take on this character type.