Soulless Creature

Soulless Creature

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marsy7 By marsy7 Updated Jul 17

Lucy is not dramatic, she's not whiny, and she never lets the world put her down. She is sympathetic, and curious as ever - so what happens when she meets a dark, brooding, hot dude who unexpectedly keeps getting in her way? 
  He might look like an angel but he certainly is the exact opposite. He is everybody's worst nightmare, and no one should get in his way because he might just end their lives with a snap. Lucy should definitely avoid him at all costs, but what happens of course? She falls in love with him.
  
  ❝Be careful, looks can be deceiving. What may be easy on the eyes, may just be a serpent in disguise.❞
  
  Cover done by @_kaylaxmarie

Amy is the kind of girl that would survive in a horror movie
clairelaura clairelaura Feb 29
Drake sounds like an ass :P but he has potential as a character. Great chapter your descriptive language is on par :) I want to read more!
O.O im used to guys with piercings and dark hair...this is new
I loved this chapter, you used a ton of words that kept me hooked! If only this was longer :/
prettyme67 prettyme67 Jan 09
I was intrigued by the synopsis of your story ad started reading right away. I have to say it is very astounding and is very well described. I love Lucy's character. It is very good. Keep it up! =)
solacing solacing Jan 06
Haha wow that was kind of a shocker, I can't even imagine if a dude acted like that towards me. Pretty interesting, though. You say he isn't a typical bad boy so I'm looking forward to finding out your take on this character type.