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Soulless Creature

Soulless Creature

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marsy7 By marsy7 Updated Jul 17, 2016

Lucy is not dramatic, she's not whiny, and she never lets the world put her down. She is sympathetic, and curious as ever - so what happens when she meets a dark, brooding, hot dude who unexpectedly keeps getting in her way? 
  He might look like an angel but he certainly is the exact opposite. He is everybody's worst nightmare, and no one should get in his way because he might just end their lives with a snap. Lucy should definitely avoid him at all costs, but what happens of course? She falls in love with him.
  ❝Be careful, looks can be deceiving. What may be easy on the eyes, may just be a serpent in disguise.❞
  Cover done by @_kaylaxmarie

Bestfriends147 Bestfriends147 Dec 16, 2016
So far it is amazing you don't need to worry about your book not being good enough. If you think it is good that is all that matters.
I was intrigued by the synopsis of your story ad started reading right away. I have to say it is very astounding and is very well described. I love Lucy's character. It is very good. Keep it up! =)
dull_roses dull_roses Jan 01, 2016
The red hair shows that he's a bad boy and that's actually nice since the red hair is  kind of unique. :)
blover99 blover99 Dec 29, 2015
I like how you set everything up clearly in the first chapter; so the reader knows about her family life and abuse and the intriguing new guy and it prepares the reader for the rest of the book as they know the basic information. I found it very interesting and engaging.
-nefarious- -nefarious- Dec 23, 2015
I'm really intrigued by Lucys life and personality. She's really different from the majority of the characters on wattpad nowadays. I also really like the way you describe everything. I really can't wait to read more.
Africanpisces Africanpisces Dec 23, 2015
I am so guilty of this behavior especially when it comes to people we have a crush on. The latest one is Mr Sexy tallness ...