The Beautiful Girl

The Beautiful Girl

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Jordan By TheUltimateFatMan Completed

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A/N: This piece was written at a very vulnerable time in my life, and it means a lot to me. This was my very first attempt at a romance piece. Poetry is what the writer makes of it. This is an abstract Poem/Fable/Ballad designed to be interpreted differently by each reader. Breathe-in experience, breathe-out poetry. ~ Muriel Rukeyser

There once was a beautiful girl. With all the beauty you could possess in the world.

Her hair as dark, as the summer night, her eyes, beautiful, green, and bright.

This beautiful girl you could say. Was as nice, as a bright sunny day.

She wore the most dazzling dresses, best jewelry, and such, but the only thing her heart yearned for, was a true mans touch.

She ached and she quaked, and felt deep inside, "I want a true hearted man, to be my pride!"

So she got up and went out, and gathered some men, and do you know what happened then?

She eliminated the too tall, the too fat, the too thin....

Sabiha_X Sabiha_X Jun 06, 2014
I love this so much, beauty is nothing, it is what's inside that counts, well written Bro!
seasofme seasofme Apr 03, 2014
my grandfather always told me a similar story. he knew what he was talking about. your story is much better told than his. and in rhyme. lovely! :)
MysticWolves MysticWolves Feb 17, 2014
This poetry is phenomenal! I love it and it has real meaning. It truly is beautiful
Sabiha_X Sabiha_X Oct 25, 2013
Hear! Hear! this poem is so good, You my friend have a natural talent, You should publish your works. I want to hold your poem in my hand while reading it. Keep on trucking!
-staygold -staygold Jun 28, 2013
This is going to be stuck in my head for the lyrics of an old love song :D xoxoxo
PrincessYuuki9 PrincessYuuki9 May 23, 2013
                              OH MY GOSH.
                              I WILL FOREVER LOVE THIS.