I love this so much, beauty is nothing, it is what's inside that counts, well written Bro!
my grandfather always told me a similar story. he knew what he was talking about. your story is much better told than his. and in rhyme. lovely! :)
This poetry is phenomenal! I love it and it has real meaning. It truly is beautiful
Hear! Hear! this poem is so good, You my friend have a natural talent, You should publish your works. I want to hold your poem in my hand while reading it. Keep on trucking!
This is going to be stuck in my head for days...like the lyrics of an old love song :D xoxoxo
                                    OH MY GOSH.
                                    I WILL FOREVER LOVE THIS.