My brother's best friend loves me!! Major Editing/Re-writing

My brother's best friend loves me!! Major Editing/Re-writing

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LiveFreeUndefined By LiveFreeUndefined Updated Sep 27

A story about a girl who has a protective brother who scares all the boys away, a boyfriend who is her brother's best friend, and two best friends that always have her back.What could go wrong right? Peyton Williams and her brother Carter Williams will go through a series of pain, humor, anger and death. Will they all make it out alive? Read the book to find out...

thewarrior- thewarrior- Jun 14, 2012
@addymegan No! What I'm saying is that I'm happy that there isn't that much kissing and sex scenes. It's just that the cover photo doesn't really suit this kind of mature story, well you can call it mature-ish.
LiveFreeUndefined LiveFreeUndefined Jun 13, 2012
@Linale9 I'm sorry I don't know how to write kissing or sex scenes that well.
thewarrior- thewarrior- May 12, 2012
I think that this is a great story, but when I first saw the picture I thought it would be a little more not so.....PG
LiveFreeUndefined LiveFreeUndefined Aug 03, 2011
@xsugarspice yeah I will fix them and thanks for the advice.
LiveFreeUndefined LiveFreeUndefined Jul 30, 2011
@xsugarspice So you like it? It's my first book and I really didn't know how it would turn out.
LiveFreeUndefined LiveFreeUndefined Jul 28, 2011
@xsugarspice sorry that the story chapters are all weird and you have to keep going to the chapter index to get the next chapter. I dont know why it does that.