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You Don't Believe Me (rewriting)

You Don't Believe Me (rewriting)

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Noneofyourbuisness By chasingxdreams Updated May 24, 2011

(Previously: Secrets Exposed) Where love and lies go hand in hand. We all have secrets. Some bigger than others. Some exposed to the world, some hidden with lies. But one secret leads to the next and things just keep on getting worse for Theresa, as she tells the past two years of her life in a notebook. She was put into a mental hospital, for being blamed for something she didn't do. And it all started out with one secret, eventually leading to a twisted tragedy causing her to go to the mental hospital. Then later finding out the unexpected truth.

chasingxdreams chasingxdreams Jun 10, 2011
@SecondHandSFan3 Thanks! Glad you like it :) and it's not all like romance. Towards the end there's more suspense and like.. Stuff like that lol. And the chapters get longer haha sorry about that. But thanks so much for reading :)
iToldYouSo iToldYouSo May 08, 2011
I Like It.....No wait scratch that.....I love it!!!! LoL Sorry I can be crazy or random at moments....... x)
chasingxdreams chasingxdreams Mar 13, 2011
lol don't worry, her character will become clearer as the story goes on. 
                              But thank you very much :)
DMAAAA2 DMAAAA2 Mar 13, 2011
I like your writing, it's simple and clear. Your main character is a bit too naive for my taste, but she seems interesting. And I love the mysterious atmosphere you built in your story. I'll be be looking forward to your next chapters. 
                              Good Luck :)