Innocent Betrayal - The Descendants of Light (-On Hold)

Innocent Betrayal - The Descendants of Light (-On Hold)

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Kate By Zoolander234 Updated Feb 19, 2011

'The only defence we have against betrayal is distrust.'
Rosetta Chalmers lives a lonely depressed life. With her parent's callous deaths; she falls into an isolated bubble, trusting no one but her best friend of six years, Hannah. Her mother's death begins to claw at her conscience and, after a string of horrific events commencing with a scarring hallucination, Rosetta begins to realize Hannah has a dangerous secret; one she vows to uncover. But does she truly want to? Is she willing to sacrifice their strong friendship? Within a short while, Rosetta notices that the secret Hannah keeps corresponds with the tragic murder of her mother. From then on, she is dead-set on unveiling Hannah's dark and dangerous past. 

Follow sixteen year old Rosetta as she embarks on a journey filled with forbidden love, bloody brutal fights and the ultimate heart-breaking, soul-shattering, bone-crunching betrayal, to expose her best friend for the deadly villain she truly is.

Zoolander234 Zoolander234 Feb 14, 2011
@Sweetgal2012 Thanks:) Yeah, I know what you mean..I was just aiming for a more laid-back first chapter and then the plot will begin to build as the story goes on. But Thanks:)
Sweetgal2012 Sweetgal2012 Feb 14, 2011
Keep going.. It's good... Leave us with questions and suspucion 
Sweetgal2012 Sweetgal2012 Feb 14, 2011
I like it.. It's good for it's first part.. Keep going.. Leave us with questions and suspicion