The Killer From The Summit

The Killer From The Summit

236 Reads 31 Votes 4 Part Story
Eric Heiden By EricMichaelHeiden Completed

A weekend getaway turns into a fight for survival when six friends are trapped on a remote mountain.
     
Frantic, they search for a way off, only to find out they aren't alone.
      
Up on the mountain with them is something that's been there for ages...something with blood on its hands...something intent on shedding more.

  • climbing
  • couple
  • engaged
  • engagement
  • ghost
  • haunted
  • heights
  • horror
  • mountain
  • mystery
  • rock
  • scary
  • supernatural
  • weird
thatweirdwriter2018 thatweirdwriter2018 Aug 23, 2017
The story is a nice one. I hope you've time to complete it. Nice job.
The_word_dream The_word_dream Sep 12, 2017
I just kept thinking, oh god something's gonna happen, something's gonna happen...Flee while you can! 
                              Really good. Even though the happy moments...There was just this feeling of impending doom.
                              good one.
agrimscythe agrimscythe Aug 30, 2017
Well then. That would make me stop, too. XD Great job editing.
thesecasey thesecasey Aug 25, 2017
Nicely written (and edited), Eric. Good flow and pacing to this.
RileyRats RileyRats Jul 19
I love the idea of this starting with a proposal. Gives them a legitimate reason to be there. Too many of these "friends in the wilderness" horror stories start on a weak pretense. It also humanizes your characters. The pacing is great.
This is sooooo good! It really grabs the reader's attention. I cannot wait to see where it goes.