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Senior Year

Senior Year

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Hannah By justdontyouidiot Updated Mar 01, 2015

Jessica is a girl who is in an abusive relationship with her boyfriend Luke. Luke is the quarterback for the high school. One day the football coach Jason, catches him hit her. That's when she feels the spark.

ArcticPilots776 ArcticPilots776 Aug 12, 2016
An amazing start. The way you write really immerses me into the story
JustineMiller623 JustineMiller623 Nov 17, 2016
It said "ever since he was a freshman" and now he is a senior
Charlii93 Charlii93 Mar 11, 2014
Nice start to your story, it is a little on the short side for a chapter, maybe it would be best for you to put Chapter 1 & 2 together to lengthen it. Also there are a few mistakes that you would pick up on from proof reading.