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Jujutsu Kaisen Story Ideas & Sneak Peaks? od LunaWolfKitten
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Jujutsu Kaisen Story Ideas & Sneak...od LunaWolfKitten
So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest...
Baby Love od _marthapardoe
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Baby Loveod _marthapardoe
The story of a young girl growing up with her cold hearted mother. Follow her life as she grows up in two different worlds. Her home life and her school life.
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No Place Like Home od JustAnotherWriter15
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No Place Like Homeod JustAnotherWriter15
Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)
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In the Reverse  od BWarrior23
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In the Reverse od Brooke Guerrier2
In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all...
Writing For School od ArchaicMenagerie
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Writing For Schoolod Antiel Quendak
Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?
Commute od OnTrashMostOf
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Commuteod OnTrashMostOf
A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm...
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Blood on the trail od PNW_chick24
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Blood on the trailod PNW_chick24
Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17
Best Friend's Enemy od _ItsMiranda_
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Best Friend's Enemyod _ItsMiranda_
-Mia: sweet, kind, unpopular -Toby:secertly likes Mia, kind, somewhat popular -Ryan: total badboy, popular. Mia fall in what she thinks is love with her best friend's en...
Arktul (Weird name right?) od wickdtears
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Arktul (Weird name right?)od wickdtears
....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-
My Mindless Musings od kazza1010
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My Mindless Musingsod Kpop enthusiast
just a series of random short stories and weird thoughts by me, the stories will mainly be fantasy and maybe a bit of horror here and there. if you do choose to read thi...
The Bronze Curse od TheHalfBloodKing
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The Bronze Curseod TheHalfBloodKing
Shane Gastling must cross to the most dangerous part of his land to defeat an enemy more powerful than any, the Immortal Master. He must hurry, before the Master's army...
Deadly-Sweet od Raymon433
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Deadly-Sweetod Raymon
Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...
The Terrorists.. od QRehman
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The Terrorists..od QRehman
Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you...
Stranger od Mkeplinger
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Strangerod maya
First it was the dreams. It's how he communicated with me. Now, it's more than dreams. And it's real. If I want to get out of this alive, do I trust him? Or do I trust...
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