Argumenative histórias

This is an argumentative piece I wrote for school. I want your feed back on it, please feel free to write what you think in the comments.

This essay is my opinion on the sport of horse racing. I put a lot of work into my research and into this essay.

I received a B+ on this essay from my professor and I was so proud of this essay I thought I post it here. It is a persuasive essay on why birth control should be govern...