MaNan ff- Hidden girlfriend

By Ms_optimistic_girl

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MANIK = MA + NANDINI = NAN = MANAN .. For me its the meaning of pure love ... love that couldn't define in l... More

Intro...
Characters..
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Khushi
Chapter 3
Chapter4
Chapter 5
Part6
Part7
Part8
Part9
Part10 -A romantic date...
Part11 -beautiful morning
Part12 : Unexpected
Part13: rooth na jana tumse kahu toh...
Part 14 : start of somethink new
Part15: Uh are my life, my heart,my soul..
Part16: u are my shining star..
Part17: forever yours ...
Part18: Now u are notthing for me
Part19: would to be mrs manik malhotra ...
Part 20 : Till the star shine & firefly exists ...
Part 21: she is my heaven ..
Part22: you are mine only mine..
Part23: this karwa chauth is so special ..
part24 : because I love nandini..
Part25: no matter what we will be always togather...
Part26: every think is ruined ..
Part27: ohh please we don't want your fake friendship ..
Part28:I promise to never hurt you ...
part29: I am talking to my wife not any Neighbors wife ..
part30:I'M super fine till nandini is with me ...
part31: finally our love birds comes ...
part32: mani you scared me ...+ happy new year ....
part 33 : The most wonderfull feeling ..
part 34: shona why you kissed him..
part35: will you be my girlfriend ..
part36: Manik make me your ..
part 37: I don't need luck i have you my side.. please read note at end ..
part38: The next girl I'LL ever love will be our daughter/ note
part 39: you don't have to say please just order my jaan ....
part 40: will you be mrs aliya rohan smith???
part41 who is she amma?? ..
part42: you know your every kiss make ke feel alive...
part43: we missed you all so much ..
Part 44: mahi can i get my amma back...
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Part45 : why she never get insecure for me ??

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Nandu is sitting down and Laxmi is sitting on the bed doing hot oil champion of Nandini...


Laxmi: aayo nandu Kitna time ho gya na humha assa time spend kiya...

Nandini: haa amma aap toh bahot hi busy rehti ho ( Mahi ke sath) this thing she said silently

Laxmi: assa nai hai Kanna aacha chal Ek kaam karta kal ka pura din kanna our uski amma kyo Pehle Jaise ...

Nandini( excitingly ): haa amma bahot acha idea kal na hum theme park jaye gha restaurant jaye gha shopping bhi jaye gha bahot maza kare gha ... yuppie kanna our uski amma ka din...

Laxmi is very happy seeing Nandini happy becomes she know no one can take Nandini's place in her life because after whatever raj done with her and after lossing her own blood Nandini has given her the rey of hope that she can also live her life normally and finally ending the day kanna sleeping hugging her amma like a kid ....

Manik is was looking at then lovingly because he knows nandini is getting  insecure about pooja but he made a puppy face .

Manik(cutely): why she never get insecure for me ??...

(Awww manik is so cute na?)

Then thinking all those stupid things he went for sleeping but he knows that he can't sleep with cuddling her jaan ...

Next day ...

Everyone having chitchat at breakfast but raj is sitting so quietly as if he was thinking something but Nandini is very happy today because of laxmi and her day out . mahi say something to laxmi..

Mahi: amma kya aaj mera sath chalo gha .....

But before zz  laxmi can say any think nandini says ...

Nandini: no ...

Every body look her for a moment manik was about say something to cover up  but before thay nandini realises what she said thats why again she says...

Nandini: i...i.. mean today is kanna and uski amma day so no one eles ...

Mahi is definitely sad because a girl who lost her mother but finally getting a mother love plus she is very pampered child and get what ever she want but when she come indian all thinks change because here nandini is most pampered and important person for every one ..

Mahi pov's...

Nandini Nandini Nandini sab koi srif Nandini karta rehta hai mujhe pta kisi ki koi glti nai hai par mei nai samjh pa rahi hu ki kya karu mei pehle manik pasnd karti thi mei ussa par jana diya ussa kyo ki mujhe pta hai ek anchahe rishta mei rehna kasa ho phir Dhruv aaaya mujhe uska saath bahot aacha lagta hai par jab fab5 our Nandini Australia gyi tha toh mei amma ke karib aaye ek maa ka pyar kya hota hai yeh paya kyo ki meri khud ki maa ke pass toh mera liya time hi nai tha unko toh bus apna aap se mtlb tha jab amma se mili tab pta chala ki maa ka pyaar kya hota unka karib phir jab Nandini wapis aaye toh mujhe se dur ja rahi hai mei bhi buri nai hu mujhe bhi pyaar chahiya maa ka ....

Pov end ...

Definitely mahi is sad seeing the changes but she can't do any thing for now  raj can't see her daughter like that but he knows it was her fault only that they are suffering....

Raj pov's: i have to do something and make my family together again please laxmi ke aayiappa do something.... end ...

Manik pov's : i have to make Nandini understand that amma is with her she not gona leave her .... end ...

After that breakfast Nandini and Laxmi when to theme park and have alots of fun laxmi is cycling and Nandini is sitting at back with balloons in her hand and both are laughing loudly....

( imagine Nandini at back )

After that they went to mall and shops lots of things ...

After that they weny to manicure and padicure then they pose to show their manicure

and after a long day they went to beach for a relaxing so they can talk a little.... they are walking around the because barefoot holding their sandals in their hand and talking ....

Nandini: amma meri se dur kabhi mat jana please...

Laxmi: arey kanna mei tumse dur kaha jau ghi bala ek maa apni beti se dur ja skti hai ...

Nandini: amma pta nai kyo par aapko na mahi dekh ke assa lagta hai ki aap mujhse dur ja rahi ho or mahi toh raj uncle ki beti or raj uncle toh
But she stop's in middle because she knows laxmi will get hurt but laxmi know that Nandini know's everything becomes she seen her their Thats why she holds Nandini's face in her hand ...

Laxmi: kanna tumha pta hai jab pehle bar tumha mei na apna kod mei liya tha na toh mujhe completeness feel hua because ek aurat tabhi puri hoti hai jab vo maa banti hai or mujhe maa tu banya toh tujhse dur ja ke toh mei adhuri ho jau ghi na toh kasie tujhse dur jau mei bol ...

Nandini hugs laxmi tightly became she know all this thinks but still an insecurity is their in her heat and laxmi understands that...

Laxmi: nandu kanna mahi se tujhe insecure hona ki jarurat nai hai meri life mei koi bhi teri jagha nai le skta ...

Nandini( crying) : I know but dar lagta hai aapse dur hona phir se orphan hona ka ...

Laxmi ( hugs Nandini tightly): kanna tu anat nai hai mei hu na teri maa bus mera bacha rota nai mei hu na tera sath chup ho ja ....

Laxmi is very worried for Nandini but she know's now manik can only do something thats why she make Nandini sit and called manik ...

Laxmi: hello manu beta kya tum beach aa skta ho ..

Manik: haa amma mei aata hu ....





Their is update guys this chapter doesn't have any manan scene but this chapter have a beautiful bond of mother and daughter now lets see how manik gona make nandini understand that laxmi loves her very much and no one can replace Nandini in her heart ...

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* only 4 chapters more to go then a epilogue ...

-shivani...

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