JAKE'S PUNISHMENT

By RileyJones622

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What happens when a grieving family decide to take the law into their own hands and impose their own punishme... More

Chapter 1 - THE ACCIDENT
Chapter 2 - THE SENTENCING
Chapter 3 - GETTING ON WITH IT
Chapter 4 - WAKING UP IN HELL
Chapter 5 - THINKING
Chapter 6 - ATTITUDE ADJUSTMENT
Chapter 7 - SIR
Chapter 8 - BOREDOM
Chapter 9 - MEET THE FAMILY
Chapter 10 - GUILTY OF MURDER
Chapter 11 - LIFE SENTENCE
Chapter 12 - BOOKS
Chapter 13 - THE PHONE CALL
Chapter 14 - HAIR
Chapter 15 - THE BITCH
Chapter 16 - PART TIME GUARDS
Chapter 17 - HOLIDAY
Chapter 18 - SUMMERHOUSE
Chapter 19 - HUNGRY AND THIRSTY
Chapter 20 - FIGHT
Chapter 21 - SWEET DREAMS
Chapter 22 - DANNY
Chapter 24 - HOLDING A GRUDGE
Chapter 25 - CHLOE
Chapter 26 - BACK FROM THE HOLIDAY
Chapter 27 - JAKE'S PARENTS
Chapter 28 - DONALD
Chapter 29 - LORRAINE
Chapter 30 - THE VISITORS
Chapter 31 - ALEX
Chapter 32 - PREGNANT
Chapter 33 - DARREN
Chapter 34 - GROUNDED FOR 10 YEARS
Chapter 35- BIRTHDAY
Chapter 36 - AMPUTATION
Chapter 37 - ARGUMENT
Chapter 38 - AN HOUR OF FREEDOM
Chapter 39 - THE LEATHER STRAP
Chapter 40 - 5000 LINES
Chapter 41 - SOLDIER
Chapter 42 - FACING THE WALL
Chapter 43 - SNOW
Chapter 44 - BETRAYAL
Chapter 45 -JAKE AND CHLOE
Chapter 46 - ESCAPE
Chapter 47 - THE WOODS
Chapter 48 - THE CHASE
Chapter 49 - CRASH
Chapter 50 - DOUBLE MURDER
Chapter 51 - LAWFUL CUSTODY
Chapter 52 - CELL INSPECTION
Chapter 53- HOT AND COLD
Chapter 54 - PRISON VISIT
Chapter 55 - TWO LIFE SENTENCES
Chapter 56 - CONCLUSION

Chapter 23 - THE GIRLFRIEND

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Jake was alone in the dark. It had been several days since the lads had sentenced him to spend the next 3 days in the dark in the basement. He just wished this could all be over soon, at least when Sir and Chloe came back the others wouldn't have so much power over him anymore. He even wished Danny was around more, what was it with him lately? He seemed to be distancing himself from the house and from being around Jake. When he was there he was nice to Jake and Alex, Ryan and Tony had even accused him of going soft



Up in the kitchen, Danny was there with his girlfriend

''Are you really sure you want to do this?'' he asked her fretfully

''Quite sure'' she replied confidently

At that moment Alex walked into the kitchen and was surprised to see this strange girl in the house

''Oh hello,'' he said ''who is this then?''

This is my girlfriend'' Danny told him

''Oh yeah, the latest in a long line of them right'' taunted Alex, looking at the girl with a smirk ''my brother never keeps a girl for long'' he said to her ''I'd make the most of it while it lasts love''

''Shut up, this time I am ready to settle down'' protested Danny

''Yeah right''

''Anyway, why is she in our house?'' Alex asked, giving Danny a look

Danny looked sheepish as he replied ''She's come to meet Jake''

Alex was both stunned and angry

''You told her about Jake? Are you mad?''

''I had to, I had to tell someone and she had a right to know. I want to marry her but I needed to be honest with her first''

''YOU STUPID CLOWN!'' Alex screamed ''YOU KNEW DAMN WELL WE WERE SUPPOSED TO KEEP IT A SECRET, NO ONE OUTSIDE OF THE FAMILY WAS EVER SUPPOSED TO KNOW ABOUT JAKE YOU FUCKING MORON''

''YEAH WELL I'M SICK OF ALL THIS'' Danny yelled back ''I'M SICK OF THE WHOLE THING, I DON'T HATE JAKE ANYMORE, I JUST WANT TO LET HIM GO HOME AND END ALL THIS''

''YOU STUPID IDIOT, RYAN, TONE AND I KNEW YOU WERE GETTING SOFT BUT WE HAD NO IDEA IT WAS THIS BAD...AND TELLING YOUR GIRLFRIEND ABOUT IT, THAT WAS THE MOST FUCKING STUPID THING YOU'VE EVER DONE''

Alex and Danny started to scrap as the tension rose and they couldn't control their tempers. The girl rushed forward to pull them apart

''Stop this now!'' she said ''fighting each other won't help here''

''This has absolutely nothing to do with you'' Alex told her aggressively ''Danny made a big mistake telling you and bringing you here because now I don't think I can let you leave this house and risk you exposing us''

''Don't talk crap bro'' Danny said ''you have no choice but to let her go, stop talking rubbish''

''I could kill her, it might be the only solution and it will be no one else's fault but yours Danny

Danny squared up to his brother again, this time even more aggressive ''I won't let you hurt her or kill her, never''

''Look it's ok'' the girl said in a calm and soothing voice, showing no fear despite Alex's threats ''I'm not going to tell anyone about this, you see I really don't care what you do to Jake, I hate him and I am happy to see him suffer. He deserves his punishment, he is a selfish asshole and he treated me very badly''

The two young men looked at the girl in surprise

''You know Jake already?'' Danny asked her. looking surprised

''Oh yes, and I hate his guts''

''Well, how do you know him?''



In the basement, Jake was just falling asleep when he was woken by the sound of the door opening and then the light was switched on and the sudden brightness hurt his eyes sat up and glanced up, squinting to see the three figures standing in the doorway ''we've brought someone to see you'' Alex said to him. Jake looked up and couldn't believe what he was seeing ''Hello Jake you bastard'' she said to him coldly. The girl in the doorway was Mandy

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