How NOT to write a Vampire Di...

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Ever wonder how to get started with a Vampire Diaries Fanfic? Having trouble with your OC? Need some face cla... More

summary
siblings
proper related face claims
proper age face claims
more face claims
more sibling face claims
even more face claim choices! (plus ideas)
overpowered OC's
a plot for your OC
correct characterization
a vampire's humanity switch
characters names and OC names
slowburns, fastburns, and sexual activity, oh my!
'changing' a bad guy
the vampire diaries vs true blood
covers
overused face claims
covens, packs, and what else
diaries everywhere
gilberts
hayley marshall
hope's twin
mikaelson love interests
new reading material
banshee's
creatures ideas part one
creatures ideas part two
ya'll need to give elena a break
i cant believe i forgot this
racial diversity
legacies fanfics so far
roasting legacies for its untapped potential
roasting legacies part 2. and season ideas
where did the legacies reactions go??
what no one wants to talk about
OC's around CC's
klaus vs kai
siphoners and heretics
salvatore siblings
adoption plot vs. adoption element
lets talk about soulmates
the truth about rippers
a not-so self insert fic
thank you Anna!!!
fuck off with the scoobies
new legacies story!
AU's, to do or not to do
legacies, we could've had it all

titles and descriptions

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By polaroized


Stop stupidly doing that stupid thing where the title stupidly goes

The Other Gilbert

The Other Salvatore

The Other Original

The Other Mikaelson

The Other Hybrid

The Other Petrova

The Other Doppelgänger

The Other Lockwood

The Salvatore Sister

The Gilbert Sister

Elena's Twin Sister [really? no creative backbone at all? not even five minutes to google a title generator website? not even that?]

Little Sister

The Lockwood Sister

The Petrova Sister

Baby Gilbert

Baby Lockwood

Baby Mikaelson

Youngest Gilbert

Youngest Salvatore

Youngest Mikaelson

Gilbert Girl


please avoid the following keywords:

Other

Sister

Youngest

Girl



Or else.



or just the title being Enter-Pretentious-and-over-the-top-or-incredibly-basic-name-here Gilbert/Salvatore/Mikaelson. You can literally play a game with any random name and spin the wheel on either three names and you'll get an actual book on Wattpad.


These titles aren't original (pun not intended but appreciated) and they don't draw your reader in to check your book out, most likely just flip through the next one cuz the readers are gonna be like:




Now, we also gotta stop with the song title titles. That only works if the song itself can actually be compared with what you're trying to write.


Otherwise, it's just another 4 chapters long book called Gasoline about a Gilbert twin who falls for Stefan and is by far the dullest cardboard cut out of Katherine Pierce where the only piece of information you have for the description (you know the thing that's supposed to intrigue us to click on your book) to go like this:

"Are you insane like me?
Been in pain like me?"

in which not-elena gilbert meets a strapping handsome man with a penchant for blood

there, that's it, i have just created a gilbert fic that has been reused more times than people have gone to see Endgame

or how about one of these:

"Some legends are told
Some turn to dust or to gold
But you will remember me
Remember me, for centuries"

where the youngest salvatore crosses paths with the original hybrid


i mean, come on guys, we've all read or seen these




I know that titling something isn't the easiest thing in the world, but it will come to you, sometimes it's obvious, other times it takes weeks but it's always worth it.

Just, try and figure out what the book means to you or what it means in general.

Try any means necessary, from title generator websites to binging on your favorite songs to see if it can relate to your story, or a simple quote or phrase you love, just something


but by no means, can the title be the OC's name

that's just friggin' lazy (especially if their name is over the top and way too extra)


and it's okay if you include a quote or a song lyric in your description, but don't let that be the only thing you write (also, yes, im a hypocrite, i did it once in a book description, and it's a book im not very proud of anyway)


you really wanna be a writer? go find any paperback or hardcover book you have in your room whether it be Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, The Mortal Instruments, The Kane Chronicles, The Divergent series, Hunger Games, Heroes of Olympus, even a YouTuber's published book, anything, and check the back for the summary.

Writers have to write a description for whatever the hell they're publishing.

So right now is the perfect time to practice if it doesn't come easy to you. Time is a gift, use it.

Don't half-ass your titles and don't half-ass your descriptions.

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