I am very aware this story is full of holes, horrible knowledge and all over bad tags leading to troubled readers. I do wish to apologise for the short comings I am displaying when it comes to my writing skills, though it is why I haven't gotten back into finishing or writing any further stories.
This along with several others will more then likely be removed soon, and with all my back ups destroyed a few years ago them returning anywhere else by my hand is extremely unlikely. If you enjoyed the story I'm grateful it was good enough for someone to enjoy, if you didn't I'm glad for the feedback that has been given. It does help writers grow even if I already knew most of the feedback.
Any questions or concerns I can happily answer if you'd like, or if your interested in the way I had it planned to end your more then happy to ask as well. Just message on here or leave a comment and I'll get to them on my off hours of work.