Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372
Title. Winter's Edge
Author: Cephyr13
Action/Adventure
Title/Cover/Description:
The title is interesting, and mostly fits with the book. The cover is nice, and describes the story in a picture. The description is good, but I think it gives away a tad to much information, but, that's just my opinion.
4/5
Beginning/Details:
This story is very detailed and I like how it starts with a flashback. The first few chapters are very interesting and engaging. One suggestion is to describe Ian's powers a bit better.
4.3/5
Character Development:
I like the way Ian's character acts. His reactions to his powers are very good. Abby's character also develops well.
4.6/5
Plot:
Plot is engaging, flows nicely, and there are no big holes.
4.6/5
Grammer/Spelling:
There are a few Grammer mistakes that I noticed, not really any spelling though.
4/5
Overall: 4.3/5