HIS CHOSEN GIRL [MAJOR EDITIN...

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"we were just kids when we fell in love," |years 1-3| PART TWO OUT NOW!! thank you forever for 2M reads🤍 More

first year ➤the girl who got mail
first year ➤gringotts
first year ➤diagon alley
first year ➤hogwarts express
first year ➤the sorting hat
first year ➤the new best friend
first year ➤classes and break-ins
first year ➤flying lessons
first year ➤the ultimate series of events
first year ➤the troll
first year ➤quidditich
first year ➤christmas
first year ➤invisibility cloak
first year ➤more letters
first year ➤nicholas and norbert
first year ➤detention
first year ➤on a roll
first year ➤the philosopher's stone part 1
first year ➤the philosopher's stone part 2
first year ➤it's been a bloody good year
second year ➤ summer
second year ➤dobby
second year ➤flying car
second year ➤ the burrow
second year ➤back to diagon alley
second year ➤lockhart and lucius
second year ➤ollivanders
second year ➤harry nearly died
second year ➤what a welcome
second year ➤typical day at hogwarts
second year ➤mandrakes
second year ➤damn pixies
second year ➤she's a mudblood
second year ➤the chamber of secrets
second year ➤polyjuice and azkaban
second year ➤bludger
second year ➤ginny
second year ➤something bad is happening at hogwarts
second year ➤10 hours is a long time
second year ➤moaning myrtle
second year ➤dueling club
second year ➤in the dark
second year ➤sherbert lemon
second year ➤draco
second year ➤chug
second year ➤crabbe's stomachache
second year ➤i missed you
second year ➤the book
second year ➤50 years ago
second year ➤it's gone
second year ➤brightest witch of our generation
second year ➤closed
second year ➤hagrid's hut
second year ➤follow the spiders
second year ➤a very strange chapter
second year ➤flirt much?
second year ➤where is (y/n)(l/n)?
second year ➤the fight for her life 1
second year ➤the fight for her life 2
second year ➤the free elf
second year ➤the end of the year
third year ➤sirius who?
third year ➤aunt marge
third year ➤the knight bus
third year ➤reunited
third year ➤dementor
third year ➤hogwarts's designated sass queen
third year ➤the grim
third year ➤hippogriff
third year ➤boggarts
third year ➤the truth
third year ➤the riddle
third year ➤ten points from gryffindor
third year ➤blame it on genetics
third year ➤sirius black attacks
third year ➤ten more points from gryffindor
third year ➤falling
third year ➤flying
third year ➤the marauder's map
third year ➤hogsmede
third year ➤broken
third year ➤boggarts and other terrible things
third year ➤the letter that should've never been sent
third year ➤crazy
third year ➤i swear that i'm innocent
third year ➤the girl who left
third year ➤meanwhile at the ministry
third year ➤back and better then ever
third year ➤divination outbursts and unfinished essays
third year ➤the death of a hippogriff
third year ➤whomping will-oh no
third year ➤expelliarmus
third year ➤fight or flight
third year ➤the night hasn't ended yet
third year ➤mission impossible part one
third year ➤the mission impossible part two
third year ➤goodbye&farewell
third year ➤ron's five galleons
transitional chapter➤
authors note(important)
last chapter for real (15 seconds of your time)

third year ➤the rat man

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A/n
Hey guys once again I own no
characters, plot or dialogue except for the ones I make up:) thanks and enjoy my chapter of His Chosen Girl
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Your P.O.V

"Expelliarmus!" Harry screams.

Snape soars across the room and lands on an old victorian bed in the corner of the eerie room causing about a pound of dust to arise.

"What did you just do?" Ron asks looking at the boy concern very evident in his widened, blue eyes.

"What the hell did you actually just do?" I add.

I despise Snape. With a fiery, flaming passion and the feeling is much noticeably mutual. Disarming him unconscious however? That's plain out digging your own grave.

"You attacked a teacher!" Hermione yells in a vast mixture of emotions.

However he ignores us as I presumed he would and holds his wand out defensively towards the two men.

"Tell me about Peter Pettigrew," Harry demands quickly pointing his wand at Remus Lupin when he begins to respond.

"He was at school with us," the Hogwarts professor says wearily.  "We thought he was our friend."

Even from my spot about twelve feet away from him, I could see the betrayal in his eyes. 

"No, Pettigrew's dead," Harry insists. "You killed him," he says briefly moving his wand so that it points at Sirius.

"No, he didn't-!" Remus interjects before I get the chance to.

I felt bad for doubting Sirius. All the research I've done on my mum all year may have been essentially useless, but at least I did learn one thing. Sirius Black truly is innocent.

"-I thought so too until you mentioned seeing Pettigrew on the map!" Remus explains.

"The map was lying then," Harry retorts.

"The map never lies!" Exclaims Sirius from the other end of the room. "Pettigrew's alive! And he's right there!"

Sirius points his finger to our corner of the room, Ron shaking when the man's finger rests on him.

"Me?" He asks in disbelief. "He's mental! I-"

"No!" Sirius yells. "Not you... Your rat!"

"Scabbers has been in my family for-" Ron says holding the 'rat' defensively closer to him.

"Twelve years?" Sirius asks interrupting Ron. "A curiously long life for a common garden rat! He's missing a toe, isn't he?"

"So what?" Ron asks causing me to scream out in frustration.

"All they could find off Pettigrew was his-" Harry begins answering his thick headed best friend.

"Finger!" Sirius interjects again. "The dirty coward cut it off so that everyone would think he was dead. And then he transformed into a rat!"

By now Ron's little pet was squirming and whining furiously the closer Sirius came towards him.

"Show me," Harry demands.

Sirius looks at him before nodding and without a second thought, goes to grab Scabbers. Ron violently turns away whimpering and telling Sirius off.

"Give it to him, Ron," Harry says calmly.

Me on the other hand, not so calm. I walked up to Ron and held him back, quite easily might I add, so that Sirius could capture Pettigrew.

"What are you going to do to him? Scabbers! Leave him alone!" Ron yells hysterically.

Hermione runs over to him and starts trying to comfort him. While Lupin quickly grabs his wand off the floor from when Snape disarmed it and points it to that rat so that he has no way of escaping.

Sirius puts the rat down onto the old piano in the center of the room where Scabbers makes a breaks for it. The two men pounce of the rat but not quickly enough. The rat runs around the room and towards the exit. Just when I thought he had gotten away, Sirius throws a spell at him and in front of our very eyes, Scabbers turns into a human.

Let's just say that it was suddenly very clear why his animagus was a rat. He was a large and round man with a face not even a mother could love. And as Remus and Sirius pulled him back into the room, he made soft, little rat like whimpers by chattering his teeth and snorting  in a way that made me want to gag.

The rat man stood in the middle of the room, obviously thinking about his next move. He put a smile on his face and opened his arms widely.

"Remus, S-Sirius? My old friends!" He says trying to take them off guard before trying to run out of the room again, Sirius and Remus knowing better, push him back violently.

He turns around in a 360 degree circle before stopping at Harry. He scurries over to him and coos, "Harry, look at you. you look so much like your father, like James," he says as if Harry didn't know his own father's name. "We were the best of friends, him and I-"

"How dare you speak to Harry?" Sirius spurs stepping in between the two. "How dare you talk about James in front of him?"

Pettigrew runs in fright trying yet again to get away but the other two men proving once again their higher intelligence, corner him by the piano.

"You sold James and Lily to Voldemort, didn't you?" Lupin yells.

"I didn't mean to!" Pettigrew whimpers. "The Dark Lord, you have no idea the weapons he possesses."

He looks around the room again, eyes landing on me. He runs over and bows down before me. "Miss Riddle, oh how I've been dying to meet you. You will do great things, great things!" He pauses and looks me over. "So much your mother in you!"

"Don't you DARE compare me to my parents. EVER!" I scream pushing him backwards so that he lands in Sirius's arms. "You know nothing about me! But I know all about you, yes. You're a filthy, disgusting betrayal of a human."

Peter turns to Sirius shaking violently once he realizes that I am not the person to ask for mercy. "Sirius, what would you have-"

"I would've died! I would've died rather than betray my friends!"

Peter squirms out of Sirius's arms and crawls under the piano and towards the door once again but Harry jumps in front at the right moment.

"Harry, James wouldn't want me to be killed. Your dad... Your dad would have spared me, he would've shown me mercy!" He says into Harry's ear before being pulled off by Remus.

"You should have realized, Peter. That if Voldemort didn't kill you, then we would, together," Sirius yells glancing at Remus.

"No!" Harry screams still standing at the doorway.

I turn towards him. "Are you stupid? Harry I swear to Godric, I don't care what you have to say I'll kill him in a second!"

"No," Harry repeats looking at me gently. "I know what he is. But we'll take him to the castle."

"Oh, bless you, boy," Peter says dropping to the floor a look of relief washed over him. "Bless you!" He reaches out to Harry where Harry kicks him away.

"Get off! I said we'd take you to the castle. After that the dementors can have you."

The rat man's pleasant emotions immediately turn fearful an depressed as he makes some animalistic snorts and whimpers all the while his face never strays from the sick smile plastered onto his ugly face.

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i'm baaaack
hello and how are you
I feel like there is so much i want to tell you guys, but no one reads authors notes ya know so i'll keep it short

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