For the Love of a Vampire ( a ghost bird fan fic) ~Slow updates

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Ok, so I was rereading the story, which I hadn't done before but should have. In almost all the chapters, I have found a lot of faults and feel like sometimes more information was needed during the update. I'm thinking of taking it off and restarting it, making it more to my liking. It would also be giving me a better idea of who all is liking the upstates and all the new comments that might come from each update. I should have taken off my other story and done the same that I'm thinking of doing to this one, but didn't and now it's confusing people.
Ok, I just wanted to ask you guys if you would read the updated story? Or should I just keep writing this version, but doing better with it?
I'm undecided and need help! Please let me know what you guys think! If left up to me, I would probably go slightly crazy with being so indecisive about it.
Any advice, good or bad, would be awesome to have!