RED: Welcome To Fayetteville...

By WesleyBryant6

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[Highest Ranks] ***2018 Watty's Shortlist*** ***FEATURED STORY*** #1 in Novels #5 in Murder Mysteries #6 in M... More

Character List
INTRO
PROLOGUE
Chapter 1: Genni
Chapter 2: Evelyn
Chapter 3: Sheriff Mullins
Chapter 4: Kathrine
Chapter 5: Derrick
Chapter 6: The Bridge
Chapter 7: The Rat
Chapter 8: The Trigger
Chapter 9: The Blood
Chapter 10: The Crowbar
Chapter 11: Jasper
Chapter 12: The Yellow Light
Chapter 13: The Photo
-Questions & Predictions-
Chapter 14: The Call
Chapter 15: Natalie
Chapter 16: The Interrogation Room
Chapter 17: The River
Chapter 18: The Suspects
Chapter 19: The Secrets
Chapter 20: The Gun
Chapter 21: The Post
Chapter 22: The Confession
Chapter 23: The Fear
Chapter 24: The Scene
Chapter 25: The Shock
Chapter 26: The Camera
- Questions & Predictions Pt. 2 -
Chapter 27: RED
Chapter 28: The Butterflies
Chapter 29: The Buzz
Chapter 30: The Death
Chapter 31: The Knock
Chapter 32: The Past
Chapter 34: Deputy Evans
Chapter 35: The Choice
Chapter 36: The Gift
Chapter 37: The Shot
Chapter 38: The Open Book
Chapter 39: The Return
- Questions & Predictions Pt. 3-
Chapter 40: The Cabin
Chapter 41: The Search
Chapter 42: The Truck
Chapter 43: The Cat
Chapter 44: The Mouse
Chapter 45: The Lonely
Chapter 46: The Fog
Chapter 47: The Sleep
Chapter 48: The Watched
Chapter 49: Danny
Chapter 50: The Classroom
Chapter 51: The Act
Chapter 52: The Ashes
- Questions & Predictions Pt. 4 -
Chapter 53: The Hunting
Chapter 54: The Invited
Chapter 55: The Code Word
Chapter 56: The Bag
Chapter 57: The Arrival
Chapter 58: Asleep
Chapter 59: Awake
Chapter 60: The Four
Chapter 61: No Time
Chapter 62: The Duo
Chapter 63: The Breaking Point
Chapter 64: The Breath
Chapter 65: THE END
COMING SOON
UPDATE
PAPERBACK
DINNER THEATRE
A NEW BOOK!!

Chapter 33: The Darkness

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Derrick left Zach and Evelyn's house feeling comfort. He wasn't expecting to fix anything; he just wanted to apologize. He actually had a genuine smile for the first time in months. He sat in the driver seat and said a thankful prayer to God before turning his engine on and pulling away.

Zach turned to go down the hallway back to his room, but Evelyn was standing in the way, leaning against the corner.

"Well, dang," she chuckled.

"What?" Zach laughed between his sniffles.

"Derrick actually apologized? What's gotten into him!" she joked.

"I know," he smiled. "Maybe things are turning around." He walked closer to the hallway, but Evelyn didn't move.

"Don't trust him, Zach. I'm not going to lose you to him."

"He's not RED."

"We don't know who RED is... just be careful, please."

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Natalie was screaming in her room and yanking at her hair. She could barely be there knowing Jasper was just sitting on her bed. He told her he loved her, and then his body sat outside. She hated the house and was ready to leave. She lunged off her bed and grabbed her keys off the nightstand. She slung the door back, making the handle slam into the wall and leave a dent.

"Baby, what's wrong," her mom asked from the kitchen as she passed.

"I can't do this!" she screamed and ran for the door.

Her mom leaned against the counter. She knew Natalie better than anyone and knew she would be okay. She needed her time. She let her tears fall and said her prayers.

Natalie was so frazzled that she didn't take the car out of park before she slammed on the gas.

Bruuuuun. The engine yelled.

She slammed the gear shift into drive and pulled out of the driveway.

She couldn't control anything. It all just slipped from her fingers like a balloon into the sky. She couldn't wipe at her nose enough to keep the snot away. The high beams shined through the night, knowing she would be pulled over for even being out after curfew. She didn't even have enough control to care.

The last thing she lost control of was her foot. It kept pressing down.

Faster. Faster. Even faster. The needle on the dash was inching it's way to the red section as the speed kept increasing to levels the car had never gone before.

"Ahhhhhh!" she screamed. She squalled in tears. There wasn't much of anything left in her. Static.

Derrick flashed in her head. The way he threw her from the porch. Jasper. The love. The death. The gun.

Blue lights... but this wasn't in her head. She slammed on her breaks and pulled over into the gravel section of the road. The gravel popped and moved under her tires and Deputy Evans followed behind her. After stopping, she stepped from the patrol car. She had one hand on her gun and the other holding the flashlight.

Natalie's gun was sitting just in the darkness by her knee on the center cupholder. She moved it to the floorboard as the flashlight hit her shoulders from behind.

Deputy Evans looked through the window from an angle, making sure to keep her distance. The blue and red lights still flashing around as bright as they could. They were blinding Natalie from her rearview mirror.

Natalie knew if Deputy Evans were to find the gun she would be in trouble... more than she wanted to be in. She looked back and met eyes with Deputy Evans.

**Author questions: Will Natalie do something stupid? Does Deputy Evans think she's RED? Is she RED?

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