The Voices You Hear

By burijoonche

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richard and maine share a secret: they have friends who are not your typical 'friends'. a test of loyalty, fr... More

...when the pen speaks up
... when the light nags you
... when the digits are a bitch
... when the bottle comforts you
... when the elevator closes in
...when the secrets are revealed
...when the office is empty yet full
... when the scratch turns to breakfast
...when the morning becomes tomorrow
...when the remote gets overeager
... when pizza changes everything
... when an 'apparition' appears
... when a flip and a leap becomes the opening act
...when stories are told
...when the lights dance
... when the doors open
... when the office feels tense
... when the video clip show less than more
... when the blanket makes sense
... when the ice cream melts
... when familiarity gets mixed with drama
... when the panic turns to a tease
...when the remote is naive
... when the staff puts the pieces together
...when the dictionary is of no help
...when the waves bring promise
... when the ride up excites
... when the pen has a field day
... when the rush almost ruins
... when the spice burns
...when reality gives a scare
... when thunder and lightning drown out the rain
... when clothes get drenched
... when old umbrellas are disposed
... when reason trumps whining
... when rumors are confirmed
...when the question is asked
... when there is silence
...when the cast is introduced

...when i say what i mean to say

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By burijoonche

Thank you for reading The Voices You Hear. Thank you for the votes, the comments and even the 'promotion' (hehe) on twitter. The idea for this story is, quite obviously, from Beauty and the Beast. I saw the trailer back in January, then the movie came out in March, and I still haven't seen it in full. Haha. Anyway, so I had the plot in my mind and already knew how I would end it, but doing the other chapters in between was more of a play for me. I enjoyed exploring how each of the objects would react and answer, and I really tried to distinguish each of the characters other than what they actually are - a pen, bottle, blanket, calculator, lamp, and a remote control. Bic would be this sarcastic best friend, Bel the doting and caring grandmother or aunt (Mrs. Potts, yes), Binky's the wise uncle, Callie is the bitch officemate, and Lumos is that wingman of a friend. Oh, and Remy is that slightly annoying but really cute younger brother (whom you'd want to shut up but he's too adorable you can't help but cuddle him). I tried to avoid putting in some suggestive, sexual scenarios, but hey, this is me. I didn't go into much detail, though. Maybe in the next fic, hehe.

I suppose we all have moments in our lives when we tend to talk to inanimate stuff, ordinary things we've always had in our possession. I know I do, so don't judge. Most often it's my laptop; at times it could be my bag. Or my shoes. My point is, sometimes we just need to talk to someone, but not really expect them to respond. Sometimes we just tend to let it all out, whether someone listens or not. If we do get a response, well, then we sometimes hope that the response would be what we want to get and hear. But true friends would actually tell you otherwise, and though it goes against what we hope for, we do need to be opposed every now and then. Am I making any sense? Don't mind me. I just needed to let it out, too. Haha.

Sorry if I really don't reply on the comments, but I will try to answer or react to some, even if it's a little late.

Oh, and in my next fic, I'm shifting back to Tagalog. Na-nosebleed ako sa pagsulat nito. Shutafer. 

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