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Little Sister
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Oppression
Wayward Kinship
Queen of Treason
Internal Affliction
Fall For You
Onihunter Yuna
Secrets Hidden by Mia
I'm Writing this for You
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Tone Death
The Heart's Darkness
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The Girl in The Window
Where All Ends Meet
I remember my love
JUST A MEAL
The Edge of a Sword

SINK YOUR TEETH IN ME (boyxboyxboy)

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By Shy_Girl14

Dedicated to @lilhalleyjoseph for writing the book

Plot & Idea: Interesting

Genre: Teen Fiction

Summary: A new student transfers to Tyler's class and he instantly feels attracted to him.But there's also his brother's friend who he also feel attracted to. what happens when all three of them form an unusual relationship? And what happens when two of them are vampires? Read about this unlikely love story.

My Review: This book was good, but in my opinion i think it could have been better. The grammar could be better and when you jump into new parts don't make it random not to confuse your readers.You have a nice cover, but check on your plot. Lastly the spacing needs some adjustments, but all in all i liked it but I was not in love with it. Though don't get me wrong you probably have many dedicated readers so don't this to heart if you don't agree with it. 

Rating: 6.5

Overall: I think the story got better as it progressed and that if the hook was more interesting it would have captured more peoples attention in the beginning and you would have had more reads for this book. 

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