No One is Happy with This (Un...

By ANinnyMouse42

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~o0o~ Book 3 of the "Better Times" trilogy ~o0o~ (Book one: "The Time Before") (Book two: "A Name to Remember... More

1 ~ One Summer's Night
2 ~ Detective Frisk
3 ~ Super-Detective Frisk
4 ~ Only the Beginning
5 ~ Slack Jawed
6 ~ A Momentary Lapse
7 ~ An Offer for a Trade
8 ~ One Truth
9 ~ Not So Helpful
10 ~ Apologizing
11 ~ Just a Tool
12 ~ Metaphors
13 ~ An Answer or Two
14 ~ Opening Another Door
15 ~ Finding Doors
16 ~ A Spark of Hope
17 ~ A Moment of Misery
18 ~ Hope Rising
20 ~ Murder
21 ~ Worth It
22 ~ Theoretically
23 ~ Progress Continues
24 ~ Is This Progress?
25 ~ If It Works
26 ~ Hope Lost
27 ~ Only Just Barely
28 ~ Hope Found
29 ~ But We Do It Anyway
30 ~ Once More
31 ~ Someone Else
32 ~ That Belongs to Me.
33 ~ If a Soul Still Beats
34 ~ A Good Doctor
35 ~ Too Smart
36 ~ Papyrus's Dad
37 ~ Held Accountable
38 ~ Christmas Morning
39 ~ Mistakes
40 ~ Conversations
41 ~ One Harsh Truth
42 ~ Pie
43 ~ Diverting Disasters
44 ~ Inhuman
45 ~ Love and Puzzles
46 ~ The CORE - 2.0
47 ~ Fragments of a Soul
48 ~ A Big Reveal
49 ~ Asriel is Dead
50 ~ Stress Relief
51 ~ A Question of Morality
52 ~ No Question
53 ~ A Bit of Concern
54 ~ Arrogantly Impressive
55 ~ Uneasy Truce
56 ~ No Panic
57 ~ Passing it On
58 ~ A Solution
59 ~ Holding a Breath
60 ~ Seventeen Hours
61 ~ Excitement
62 ~ Battle
63 ~ House Tour
64 ~ Vulgar Slang
65 ~ A First Attempt
66 ~ Burnt
67 ~ Anomaly Acceptance
68 ~ Good Work
69 ~ Sharkbite
70 ~ "I Am Responsible"
71 ~ True Heroes
72 ~ Demonstration of Power
73 ~ Fauchard
74 ~ Working Condition
75 ~ Old Fury
76 ~ Practically
77 ~ Distrust
78 ~ Sympathy and Pity
79 ~ Sans is Helpful
80 ~ Sharp Answer
81 ~ Flashbacks
82 ~ Because Science!
83 ~ Tomatoes and Flowers
84 ~ The Nuances of the Stuff
85 ~ Old Songs
86 ~ New Dance
87 ~ Smart Mistakes
88 ~ Still Not a Physician!
A/N ~ Unfortunately...
A/N - What I Think is Going to Happen
89 ~ The End

19 ~ Space

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By ANinnyMouse42

Sans, you quickly learn, knows how to work hard. Of the five of you there, he works the most, the hardest, the longest. It's... a little scary, to be honest. Sans has almost as much determination as Flowey, you think, who has almost as much determination as you. Sans, you realize, can probably find a way to do anything he sets his mind to, so long as you're not opposing him with all your own determination.

But working together... you're unstoppable.

And you're making progress. Sans goes over the blueprints Alphys had been working on, and makes some modifications to his own. You help him and pick up a ton of supplies. In a matter of days, thanks to Papyrus and Undyne, Sans' partially-built machine looks more like an actual in-progress project, rather than a long-since abandoned construction site. And Alphys and Sans get the CORE turned on again (it was shut down when the Underground was abandoned) and Sans apparently knows how the CORE was built, and has a few tricks to peak the efficiency.

And over the next few weeks, you, Alphys, and Undyne practically move into Sans and Papyrus's house. It takes both Sans and Papyrus to convince Toriel it's okay that you're staying there. Once she accepts that, she still stops by often to check on you.

"hey, this is good for them." You overhear Sans arguing once on your behalf. "it's like... i dunno. a summer camp or something. and it's good for them to work on something big. it 'builds character' or something like that." Then he shrugs. "at any rate, it'll give the kid something interesting to say they did over summer vacation when they go back to school."

School. It's like the deadline of all deadlines. With it already mid-July, you've only a month and a half to get this done before school starts in September. Because you know Toriel definitely won't allow you to stay at Sans and Papyrus's during the school week. You don't know how you'll manage to help Sans with this once school starts.

You resolve to do your best. You resolve to stay determined.

Then, one day, Sans pulls you aside. "kiddo, lookit this." He leads you over to a computer monitor. The majority of the screen is black. At the bottom are a bunch of data values that make no sense to you. Onscreen, though, there's a single white vertical line. There's a small marker in the middle.

"see this?" Sans asks. "what do you think it is?"

You just shrug a little. You have no idea.

"well, alright, when was the last time you saved?"

"This morning." You usually save every morning, just in case something happens. It's pretty nice and convenient that there's a SAVE point right outside your house, and another outside the brothers' house. (You have pondered that before, why there are always SAVE points in convenient locations, but no answer has ever come to mind.)

Sans nods a little. "okay, reset to then."

You frown a little. "Why?"

Sans just gives you a wink. "i wanna show you something cool."

You shrug a little, and reach for your LOAD SAVE FILE button.

And then you're outside the brothers' house again, back to when you saved that morning. This morning. Whatever.

When you walk into the basement, Sans is already there. He grins at you. "'bout time you showed up."

You laugh a little. And then you see the computer monitor in front of him. It's like the white line has been cut off, looped around, spliced unto itself, and continued. So now there are two lines.

"i'm guessin' i told ya to reset?" Sans chuckles a little. "this is what it does."

"It's the timelines." You murmur.

Sans nods, and points to the timeline with the loop and the splice. You notice that's the line the marker is on. "that's us. and, i guess the other line is one where you didn't reset."

You look at Sans. Then you look back at the monitor. Then you look at Sans again.

The hope is still there, shining in his eyesockets.

It fills you with determination.

And then...

A few days later, Sans says you have one part of the machine built, and you're ready to test it.

You ask him if he's nervous.

"nah. not yet. see, kid, a lot of this stuff i've done before, the other time." That's how he refers to anything that has to do with the Royal Scientist. The 'other time', or the 'last time', or sometimes even the 'time before'. "stuff like this bit? folding space? i know we can do it because i've done it before. i won't be nervous until we get to the point where things went wrong last time."

You suppose that makes sense.

So you watch. Sans has a small device that he says will be put through the fold, just to test it. You don't really understand how something can go 'through' a fold, but Sans says it'll work. You trust him.

And it does work. It's like there's a distortion in the air. Alphys is at the control panel of the machine, and Sans is the one who's dropping the camera into the fold. You wanted to drop it in, but he says it's safer if he does, because he knows what to do if he falls in. That just makes you wonder how he knows.

But everything goes smoothly. Sans drops the device, it's like you blink, and the camera is landing on the opposite end of the room.

Sans just grins amid everyone's cheers. Yeah, he knew it would work. He definitely did.

Nonetheless, as he watches you, Undyne, Alphys, and Papyrus excitedly shouting over the success, you can't help but notice how happy Sans looks.

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A/N

Y'know what I really love about writing from Frisk's perspective? I can say there's a bunch of complicated science-y stuff, and not have to come up with a plausible-sounding explanation for it because Frisk wouldn't understand it.

Anyway, thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoyed it! Comments and votes are my Favorite Things, and every notification I get makes my day!

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